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Responded on my Talk Page. Larrythefunkyferret (talk) 04:59, 20 July 2008 (UTC)

It looks quite acceptable for the most part. I'm a little concerned about that last line, though, because I'm not sure what it means. Was the game not popular for long? Was it easy to beat in a short time? Did it have little replay value? Clarification may be necesary, and it's possible that an NPOV crusader might take issue with the current wording. If you can find a reviewer or someething that says something similar, problem solved. Larrythefunkyferret (talk) 06:28, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

In fact, it's not a problem of replay value (the action is good, even the story is nice to follow a second time), it's just that the game itself is quite short, something like eight hours the first time you finish it. So it's interesting for people who'd like to play it a little more to know about these mods. I've made a little change, if you find a better way of saying it (I can speak english but I'm no native), please be my guest. Diegowar (talk) 07:41, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

I made a few changes for neutrality; it should be okay for now. We can use Half Life 2's section as a model to get this thing to reach its potential, if you feel up to the work. For example, it needs examples of mods, general or specific, that have been made or are known to be under development. We should provide links to Wikipedia articles that the reader may be interested in (like this one that goes to the mod article). And as always, and I cannot stress this enough, cite your sources. Information has been removed from articles, articles have been deleted, and editors have even been blocked, because sources were not cited. By the way, you have my respect for being able to communicate competently in a foreign language. Three semesters of College level Spanish, and I still suck at the language. Larrythefunkyferret (talk) 07:19, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

I don't think I will create such a page for now (there are more than a hundred mods to check out for making a selection), maybe some day. About the sources, I don't know any about the mod section of Max Payne 2, because it's just a fact that those mods exist... nobody made it official. But if I see anything, count on me. About languages, you know, I've followed Spanish (as a second language to learn) at College (I think it's college in England/America ? Well the 15 to 18 period) for three years and I can barely speak it. The english is another story, I learnt it in video games (such as Online games, Star Ocean 3, old RPGs...), films and series (for instance, I've watch the whole Stargate series in english, subtitled in english as well), as well as shows in english (The Angry Video Game Nerd, Cranky Geeks...). So the lessons are more secondary and pretty boring too... But I've to admit that there are still domains that I don't master ("the circus" is one : I can't tell anything but "the tent"...) Diegowar (talk) 10:42, 22 July 2008 (UTC)