User talk:OArnold2017/sandbox
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Ian (Wiki Ed) in topic Feedback
Feedback
edit@OArnold2017: Nice work on your draft. This looks good. My only suggestion would be that rather than simply leaving the existing text as the article lead, that you expand it a bit to make sure that it touches on all the main points of the article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:51, 6 April 2017 (UTC)