OctopusSuction

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Hello, OctopusSuction, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:12, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

I like your name. Frankiecc (talk) 20:32, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

Response

Hi! I wanted to respond to your post on my talk page. I did some editing to add some of the content of the live article into your draft to get an idea of what it will look like once you move your work live. Offhand I don't really have many notes - I think you've done well here. My only edits were to tweak the KOFST section for slight tone issues. There wasn't anything bad, just mostly to remove the word strives (since that's often used in PR materials) and to state that these are goals of the organization. I think that you should be able to move your work live when you're ready. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:45, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

@Shalor (Wiki Ed): Thank you very much! I will try to watch out for similar tone issues in the future. I appreciate your edits and advice! OctopusSuction (talk) 17:10, 30 October 2019 (UTC)