User talk:OsseusIgni/Fanfiction.net

Peer Review

This is Emily. Good job with paring down some of the extraneous information that does not have any citations. Your citations match a lot of the content that is already embedded in the article, so using them for the sentences that say "citation needed" would be beneficial. After reviewing the citations I would say that there should be a little bit more variety. Some of your citations have similar content, so finding something that is different than what you have already found is a good way to have variety. One of the most important changes that could be made is just expanding upon some of the sections of the article that only have one or two sentences, further explaining what the original author only briefly touched on. OsseusIgni (talk) 14:03, 24 October 2023 (UTC)