Parovci

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Business School PAR

Hi, thanks for message. You can sign your comments automatically using four tildes ~~~~. Lots of problems. I deleted your recent article

• because it did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. Small parts of the article were sourced to a magazine, the rest either to the PAR website or not at all. I'm not sure why this small business school meets the criteria above.
• It was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic.

• You linked directly from the text to the organisation and its courses, which is spammy. There should be no external links at all in the main text.
• There is virtually nothing about the organisation (total number of students, budget etc) You start with the products (degree courses) which again looks promotional.
• Examples of unsourced claims presented as fact include: Students gain knowledge... students learn practical skills... Many Croatian sportsmen/women are PAR students... and had established connections and partnerships... its business and experience expanded,

If you want to have another go at this, I suggest you create it here, and let me know when you are ready. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 15:24, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

Hi Marina, I've seen your message, but I won't get a chance to look until tomorrow Jimfbleak - talk to me? 11:28, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

Hi Marina, Youtube isn't really suitable as a ref. I would bring the factual stuff to the top, and the courses after, looks less spammy. I'm not sure about notability, but when you are ready, just move to article space Jimfbleak - talk to me? 16:34, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Lugia2453 (talk) 16:25, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Re: Deletion of wiki page Business School PAR

Re your message: I deleted Talk:Business school PAR was because the associated article at Business school PAR does not exist. Orphaned talk pages like those are deleted as a matter of policy. Using a talk page as a substitute for the article page is not acceptable. -- Gogo Dodo (talk) 08:10, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

If I understood You correctly, my page were missing external links. I've put them now so it's should be ok. If I misunderstood the meaning of "associated article" please explain. Thank you in advance. Parovci Parovci (talk) 12:08, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Wywin (talk) 21:24, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Business school PAR concern

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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Business school PAR

Hello Parovci. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Business school PAR".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 05:01, 11 December 2013 (UTC)