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Peer Reviews

This article offers information on multiple different areas of Tobaron Waxman’s life and work. It does a great job listing his awards, films, and performances, as well as providing additional information not only in his biography but also in a separate section for his education.

Some suggestions to improve this article could be to further examine whether certain facts are relevant to the section in which they are placed; for example, the factoid concerning Waxman’s visit to the University of California may not need to be included in the article’s lead. Another way to revise this article could be to make it slightly more self-contained, as identified by Wikipedia’s “Perfect Article” guidelines. The language used in the “Career” section is very academic-oriented and may not be accessible to readers that have not studied art or film theory. --Manicpixiedreamsquirrel (talk) 04:20, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for your input! Pediaac (talk) 23:00, 14 November 2016 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Pediaac. Peer reviewers: Manicpixiedreamsquirrel.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 14:59, 18 January 2022 (UTC)