Pelayo.omar
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edit - Hi Pelayo.omar! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission. I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.
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Peer review on article, 'Future'.
editI can't find any edits or additions you have added to your article, Future. If you haven't yet made any revisions I have a few possible suggestions. I was wondering if in the 4th sentence this is opinion based and maybe should not be there--> ("and defining them non-controversially has consistently eluded the greatest of minds.")? In the 2nd paragraph the last sentence, is this speculation? I'm wondering if that is an appropriate sentence for Wikipedia(?). Also under the section, 'Science Fiction' there is a quote. I think one of our tutorials taught us not to use quotes even if we give credit to original author of the quote. Another thing you can look into is the references. I clicked on a couple and I am not sure about all of them. The 2nd reference listed seems to lead to a webpage for a free e-book(?) Not sure that is a reliable source to reference. I'm also not sure there are enough references for the length of the article. Colenyj (talk) 23:40, 16 May 2018 (UTC)