Phoenix Koren
Joined 1 November 2007
Latest comment: 16 years ago by TKD in topic Your edits to Halo: Combat Evolved
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Your edits to Halo: Combat Evolved
editI have reverted your additions to the setting section. In my opinion, the additional elaboration isn't really needed for a good understanding of the main plot; Wikipedia isn't for retelling stories in high levels of detail. The shorter version is probably sufficient. Ifyou want to make a case for the additional wording, please raise it at Talk:Halo: Combat Evolved so that we can discuss. — TKD::Talk 06:07, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
- If you were trying to fix the reason that the Spartans were unable to turn the tide of war, I simplified the wording and left it at "unable". For the backstory section, that level of detail is going to be fine, I think. — TKD::Talk 06:20, 15 November 2007 (UTC)