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Peer Review of Article on Lotte Strauss

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I think you have some great ideas for your article! It looks like the lead section could definitely use some more relevant information, so any important accomplishments would be helpful to include. Also, the clarification between both of the Lotte Strauss' would be very helpful, also a link of the other Lotte Strauss' Wikipedia page would be good to include. Do you happen to know one of their middle names to help distinguish? Are there other sources you that are not predominantly her research papers? Any education and career path details would be good to include as well. Can't wait to see what the final article looks like! Lindove (talk) 23:39, 10 February 2018 (UTC)LindoveReply