User talk:Pmoore2222/Sandbox

Problems with your first edit

• You started with controversy and mixed it up with potentially non-controversial CV corrections. Result: both will likely be reverted. Why?
• You cited a source in edit summary. Someone might fix that for you, but better be prepared to cite inlined references
• One source was cited for multiple corrections. Does it cover them all? Doesn't seem like.
• The source is written by yourself. It cited sources within itself, but still can't be used for claims of you being co-founder. Secondary sources are required. Regards. Materialscientist (talk) 13:14, 17 February 2011 (UTC)