User talk:Porpochista/sandbox

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Jack1104ch

Based on the what topics link to this page, I would suggest adding a link to influenza and the influenza vaccine in the Viral Vaccines section. Under the history section it may be worth talking about some of the scientists and researchers who have done work on molecular virology and linking them into it. If it is not possible to find a picture to add to the page, then I would suggest adding a link to a picture of one. A large portion of the information in the Viral Replication section is not cited. I would suggest going back and filling in the citations for the specific information where necessary. While I am sure you haven't been able to add all you want to this article yet, I would suggest working on a solid description before continuing on to the other sections to ensure that that step is taken care of. Lastly even if there is a lot more information to add about viral replication, it may be worth moving on to other sections to provide information for those sections.FeebleEagle (talk) 18:15, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

The very first paragraph should provide more information. I suggest to look up some similar broad subject pages to decide how far the introduction should go. The title of "viral immunology" section is not consistent with previous section titles. "Viral pathogenesis" section is disproportional to other sections. If that section already covered the needed information, it could be put after the history section since the rest of sections are much longer. Jack1104ch (talk) 18:27, 1 April 2016 (UTC)Reply