Good start. You may want to use another mountain climber page as a template or begin to use the headings tool in the visual editor as you set up the page. Here is a start class page on another climber: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dave_Hahn. Here is another: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Galen_Rowell. You can use these as starting templates since they have user boxes already, and then you can simply change out info.
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