The overall compilation of information looks thorough and is presented in an appropriate style. However, everything in the sandbox needs correct formatting of headers and addition of the pictures from Chinese page. Try to use horizontal lines and pictures to break up the text when possible. Also, try to link out to other wikipedia pages wherever you are referencing other well documented terms of fields.
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