User talk:RJCMorgan/sandbox

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Sweiner02

Very informative! The only thing is missing signaling cascade if known. Other than that everything is great. --Sgallo02 (talk) 05:41, 10 November 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • You have a misspelling in your first sentence when you first mention the disease.
  • Needs lots of links to other wikipedia pages.
  • Mechanism section seems to be much more about diagnosis. We do have some pathway information and connection to bone growth that could be included here.
  • Missing several sections, particularly prognosis and recent research.
  • If you reuse a source, do not make a new citation for it. Reuse the previous citation. If you're confused about how to do this, come talk to me.
  • Needs more unique citations if possible. It appears that you have lost a few from the previous version of the page. Please make sure to include those unless there is something seriously wrong with them!

--Sweiner02 (talk) 04:25, 4 December 2019 (UTC)Reply