Ra5en
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Peer Review
editHi! I really enjoyed reading your content and found it to be very informative and well written, especially for a first draft. There were a couple of things that I noticed could be edited, such as the first sentence. It comes off as quite biased, and I think it would be more helpful to say something like "many regard Cao Yu as one of the most remarkable playwrights". The other thing I did notice was that there were some sections of the article that seemed to be written in a more casual manner, such as the last sentence containing the phrase "till now" rather than "until now". It would also be helpful to add the section header that is being worked on so that the reader can tie the information to one of the sections. Overall, really great job! -Brittanyli (talk) 18:30, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
Siyuan Cheng (talk) 00:41, 30 October 2020 (UTC) The use of examples enables me to intuitively understand Cao Yu's life experience. Let the reader understand Cai Yu's life clearly. However, because there are too many references in the article, I think I should add more of my own explanations or ideas.