Readnews1
February 2020
edit
Hello, I'm MrOllie. I wanted to let you know that one or more external links you added to Usenet have been removed because they seemed to be inappropriate for an encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page, or take a look at our guidelines about links. Thank you. MrOllie (talk) 02:29, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
Hi! I saw your edits to Draft:Billy Starr, which surprised me a bit as that draft isn't currently in the review queue. Could you tell me more about why you chose to remove so much from the draft? Typically it's preferable to address non-neutrality with rewriting rather than removing information wholesale, as long as that information is cited to reliable third-party sources, which all information in the draft was/is. Also, I believe that a designated "Criticism" section is not recommended per WP:STRUCTURE. Thanks! Mary Gaulke (talk) 20:44, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
Hi. I have recieved your request to explain my article changes to the Billy Starr Article. I thought you were trying to get the article approved still. I wanted to help you make it seem less advertising like, but I was not aware you abandoned the article. Im new to wikipedia, so sorry for that! Have a nice day! Readnews1 (talk) 20:51, 27 February 2020 (UTC)