Rebecca ttt
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editLead Section
The lead section is helpful for identifying what polymer engineering is and mentioning some of its applications. It is also helpful having many of the links to other Wikipedia pages available. One suggestion I have is to quickly summarize what a polymer is after the link.
Structure
The provided sections are organized and divided up logically. Having sub-sections in the classification section improved my understanding of the diverse range of products that are all defined as polymers.
Balance
The given polymer classifications have approximately the same length. For applications, the different images emphasize that polymers are used in many industries, but the text mostly gives examples relevant to aerospace.
Neutral Content
For the most part, each section provides the information in an unbiased manner with the exception of the word "mundane" in applications. Items such as fishing rods and bicycles could simply be referred to as "other products".
Reliable Sources
The sources provided effectively give examples of polymers, but source 2 appears to be a company website and could be considered biased.
Tyoo2 (talk) 07:03, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
Thanks for your feedback! I like your suggestion that add a summary after the link. I will add it. And also I agree with your comment on structure and balance. I will add more examples about the application of polymer engineering in different fields. I will also reedit the sources and reference part after I finish all the content. Rebecca ttt (talk) 20:33, 1 March 2019 (UTC)