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Swenson's peer Review

You went pretty deep when explaining gangsta rap, so I think you should attribute as much detail when explaining conscious rap, It seemed like there was lacking information when reading the section. There is also copious use of "However" in the Donald Trump and Hip Hop section, I think this should be altered as it gives a double negative affect, which can be confusing to the reader. Overall, I think your group has done a good job of staying neutral of such a controversial topic by just stating the facts. PSwenson28 (talk) 04:33, 23 March 2019 (UTC)PSwenson28

McClain's Peer Review Comments

It was overall a well written article. There were some grammatical errors like the section about Conscious Rap and at the end in the section about Donald Trump. The use of however in the Donald Trump article isn't necessary but isn't too big of a deal. It's not an easy topic to cover so you're doing well of discussing what artists and songs are out there that promote a message about social injustice. You also have good sources. Keep up the good work and just keep working on the grammar/sentence structures. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lukemcclain (talk • contribs) 06:20, 23 March 2019 (UTC)