User talk:SGurmu/Peace Park (Seattle)

Preliminary Review from Kaylea

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.

I also notice you've left yourself quite a few notes -- it sounds like you have lots of good ideas on how to make this article shine. Keep on rolling with this!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 07:53, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval

Hi @SGurmu:

You are approved to go live with this article. One thing to fix is the images section, with the way it's laid out right now it's very chunky. Maybe a section with all your sentences on current conditions and then a Gallery template? Or you could add your condition notes as captions to the photos, since they're short.

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
8. Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 03:51, 12 February 2022 (UTC)

Final Version

My updates are complete and the live version of the article is up! This was so fun! SGurmu (talk) 23:42, 12 February 2022 (UTC)