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Great work. few comments here. Not many information about Zimmermann from Internet. It's amazing to see you to summarize his life and work

I "bold" some words in your work.

Is it possible to add a publication list of Walter Max Zimmermann? You could include some journals and books of him. Not all of them. Make a selected list is better.

I noticed you had provided many references in the end. Could you cite them in the main body. You could use the "cite", it's easy and make people know where your materials come from.

Some the other maybe useful information you could find from German wikipedia https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walter_Zimmermann I am not sure how to cite between different language wikipedia or just translate them. But i think they are wiki, they should allow us to combine all of them.

--Yourreason (talk) 22:28, 1 March 2017 (UTC)

Feedback from Emily

Emilysessa (talk) 19:35, 15 April 2017 (UTC)

Very nice work, I'm glad that you improved this page for Zimmermann!

One thing to fix is that you need to add quite a few more citations - especially in the top paragraph and Biography, there are quite a few factual statements (like where he was born) that don't have a citation and need to. Please add those. In the Biography section, this will be basically every sentence!

I'm glad you took the suggestion from peer review of adding a selected publications section, that's really great.

Excellent job!