Saritaben
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editHello, Saritaben, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:33, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
NS1150 article selection
editHi Saritaben, In reviewing your three articles I think you should either pick the article on "Liquid diet" or "Meal replacement". Let me know which you prefer and I will assign that one to you!Saguaromelee (talk) 16:26, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
Hi Saguaromelee, could I choose Liquid Diet? Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.84.125.21 (talk) 16:27, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
Feedback for annotated bibliography
editHello! A good start to the annotated bibliography but missing some details based on the strengths and weaknesses of the sources you are using. Keep in mind that each of these sources are supposed to inform the writing for your final edits to the article on "Liquid diet". As you read a source think about how it might relate to what you want to say based on what they evidence supports. I like the use of the meta-analysis as a potential resource! Let me know if you have questions. Saguaromelee (talk) 14:25, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
Final Assignment
editHi Saritaben,
Just wanted to give you direct feedback related to your final assignment. Overall I think your writing style (tone) is very appropriate for encyclopedia writing. If you want to develop your edits to be appropriate for the livespace I would recommend finding systematic reviews, or textbooks on the topic. Feel free to reach out to me if you want to pursue editing the article in the livespace! Saguaromelee (talk) 14:20, 10 May 2018 (UTC)