SawyerFrye
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No information is out of date, but I do believe there could be some more information on his coaching days in the D-League. SawyerFrye (talk) 22:02, 5 February 2018 (UTC)SawyerFrye
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:23, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
Bibliography: [SawyerFrye] https://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/1974/07/burning-up-people-to-make-electricity/304563/ https://www.theclio.com/web/entry?id=12137
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Nice start on your draft. A few things going forward
- Wikipedia articles have lead sections, not introductions. The lead should summarize all the major points in the article, and shouldn't contain anything that isn't covered in more detail in the body of the article. See pages 7-9 in the Editing Wikipedia brochure for more information about article layout and writing a lead section.
- For a better sense of what articles like this should look like, take a look at the other articles linked from the Coal Wars template (I've pasted an expanded version of the template to the right). Not all of those articles are great, but some of them are pretty good. That can give you a sense of how you might develop this article, and what the normal layout of an article like this should be.
- You need more links to other Wikipedia articles. Any term that the average reader is likely to be unfamiliar with should be linked, so people can learn more about the topic.
- You need more inline references. There should be a minimum of one reference per paragraph, and there shouldn’t be any text after the last reference in a paragraph. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:01, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
The Battle of Evarts moved to draftspace
editHi SawyerFrye, I have moved the article back into draft space because there are a couple of issues you should deal with:
a) There already is an older article Battle of Evarts. In such a case, please add material to the existing article rather than duplicating the topic. As the existing article is merely a stub that certainly warrants expansion, this should not be a problem.
b) Please clean up your material before putting it into mainspace. There's still a lot of 'assigment debris' in the text - the sandbox template, the "planned work" notes, some misformatted references etc.
Cheers --Elmidae (talk · contribs) 17:59, 5 April 2018 (UTC)