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Your submission at Articles for creation: Page365 (May 9)

Latest comment: 8 years ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

The comment the reviewer left was:

What is meant by a "sales engine built on the ground up for social commerce"? (Also, provide a reference for that claim. Remove redlinks.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 12:29, 9 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hello! Scomma, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 12:29, 9 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Scomma. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2-3 days of inactivity. Message added by — Vchimpanzee • talk • contributions • 19:33, 20 July 2016 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template).Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Page365 (May 20)

Latest comment: 8 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 13:56, 20 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Page365 (June 30)

Latest comment: 8 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

Unfortunately, the English in here is very hard to understand, and it may be difficult for someone to copy edit because of this. I don't know what to propose, although perhaps someone at Teahouse can help.

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LaMona (talk) 19:10, 30 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Page365 (July 13)

Latest comment: 8 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

Is this about the application, or about the company?

As noted by the previous reviewer, the English is so hard to understand that it is not even easy to copy-edit.

Thank you for asking for advice at the Teahouse, but this draft still isn't in condition for acceptance.

If you are working for the company, please make the proper conflict of interest disclosure and possibly paid editing disclosure, and find someone whose English is better to assist. If you are not working for the company, it would still be a good idea to request help from someone whose English is better, or you could write this in the Wikipedia of the language with which you are familiar.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Page365 and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Robert McClenon (talk) 19:13, 13 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Page365

Latest comment: 7 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, Scomma. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Page365".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Boomer Vial^{Holla! We gonna ball!} 06:48, 10 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

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