Your submission at Articles for creation: Alfred Boediman (October 2)

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Alfred Boediman

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Alfred Boediman, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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  1. If you are connected to someone or something you have written about (a few examples are writing about yourself, your business, your band, a member of your family, your client) then you should be aware that Wikipedia's conflict of interest guideline discourages you from writing about that subject. The main reason for that is that experience over the years indicates that editors with such a connection to a subject they are writing about are likely to find it very difficult, or even impossible, to stand back from their writing and see how it will look from the detached perspective of an outsider, so that they are likely to write in ways that look promotional to others, even if they sincerely think they are writing in a neutral way. Also, if your editing forms all or part of work for which you are paid, whether as an employee, as a contractor, or in any other capacity, the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use require you to state who is paying you, and what your connection to them is.
  2. I was interested to read your comment "This page is not unambiguously promotional, because it telling people one of the most notable researchers who made positive changes to society through technology. He inspires people through his books and helping Indonesian startups to flourish." Editing to inform people that you think someone "made positive changes to society" and that he "inspires people" is exactly what promotional editing is, and exactly the kind of thing that Wikipedia's policy on promotion does not allow.
  3. I see that part, if not all, of the text you posted in the promotional page you created was copied from elsewhere. It is almost never suitable to copy content from another web site to Wikipedia, for more than one reason, the most important being copyright. When you post anything to Wikipedia you release it for anyone in the world to reuse it, either unchanged or modified in any way whatever, subject to attribution to Wikipedia. It is very rare that the owner of a web site licenses content for such very free reuse, and in those few occasions when they do so, we require proof of the fact. We don't assume that content is freely licensed on the unsubstantiated say so of just anyone who comes along and creates a Wikipedia account. JBW (talk) 15:36, 3 October 2020 (UTC)Reply