User talk:Scottybbreeze/sandbox

This is a good start, but try to cite the sentences correctly within your "draft." Your draft should contain much more at this point, and you should already be editing the article. Why are your "sources" distinct from your "bibliography"? Be sure you are using Wikipedia's templates for sources. Finally, you should proofread all that you write to make it as clear and as strong as it can be. You might take it to the campus writing center. -Grlucas (talk) 18:01, 7 November 2017 (UTC)

Title for section

I wanted to ask about what I should possibly call the title of the section. Should I still just call it "Game Psychology" or maybe "Game Benefits" since that what I have mostly been writing about? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Scottybbreeze (talk • contribs) 18:30, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Is your addition just about adding a section on Games studies? You may approach that however you wish, as you are the editor; perhaps it would be most appropriate under the research subhead? Also, you should edit your contribution on a sentence level, eliminating typos and revising for clarity — all of your sentences need attention. The writing center could help with this. Finally, each sentence or two should be cited correctly; currently, none in your draft are. What you have here is a good, albeit rough, start, but you should be editing the primary article by this point. -Grlucas (talk) 18:01, 27 November 2017 (UTC)

Finished I Think

I have just about finished, I fixed the grammar and fragments. Also I cited the paragraphs with the sources that I felt contributed the most to the creation of the content. I think i will add it under "Research." Is there anything else required?

I'm not sure what you mean by "the sources that I felt contributed the most to the creation of the content". This has nothing to do with your feelings, right? All content must be cited and directly attributed. Could you explain? -Grlucas (talk) 16:11, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

Also, each sentence or two should be cited. Do not put all of your citations at the end of the paragraph. Perhaps you should review Wikipedia:Tutorial/Citing sources. -Grlucas (talk) 16:21, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

Now Finished....I think

What I meant was the sources were the ones that primarily build up the paragraphs. It has nothing to do with feelings. I also cited better than before, by adding the most relevant source to the end of every two sentences.