User talk:Sdupuy21017/sandbox

Instructor feedback

What you need is a nice simple stratigraphic diagram and some very clear sections telling us what the source, reservoir, seal are so that we don't have to plow through a lot of text to understand that. You should be aiming to complete about two screens worth of information about your basin. A cross-section would be ideal if at all possible. We need to know something about the tectonic setting of the basin as well as the hydrocarbon system. I would strongly recommend that you either make a figure describing the stratigraphy and telling us what the major rock types and names and ages are or perhaps use a suitable table that you would make yourself. Please provide appropriate references and avoid sentences like "At the conference in 2010, the data and proportion of exploration and production was presented at the AAPG 2010 Annual Convention and Exhibition in New Orleans, La. in the United States". this is essentially irrelevant. If there is a fact you'd like to present then go ahead and do that and then cite the abstract from 2010 but this is not an appropriate way to call out references. I would strongly encourage you to provide as many details as possible as if the page is too vague about the hydrocarbon system then it will be of little value.

Pclift (talk) 20:00, 14 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review : Daniela Colmenares

Stanton I like how you included an outline of the page it helps the reader see what they are going to read about and keeps the information organized. You could change your titles of each subsection to match your outline- just a suggestion. I like how you placed information about an AAPG conference , maybe expand more on this area. Be sure to cite your sources in your final copy. Pictures would supplement your information nicely, as well as a map of the region.Your information is good but I am sure you will be adding to it. In article 4 I am not sure what you are referring to when you say " the section" maybe just clarify that in that paragraph that way the reader can follow your information along. In your citations paragraph I noticed something from the movie : The Dark Knight. I am not sure if this was meant to be included or if it was a mistake just so you know for your final copy. Overall good work just make sure to add more information, cite your sources and include some pictures to supplement your information. :)