User talk:Sharris19/sandbox
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Jgriffith19 in topic Peer Review
User talk:Sharris19/sandbox
Peer Review
editI think you're off to a very solid start. Your sources are all valid and clear and your information flows really well. I think the biggest gap that currently exists in your article is how much information about reproductive rights are covered. This might not even be feasible to achieve, but I'm curious as to the Commission's perspective and policy on various forms of birth control (condoms, IUD, etc). I think that could be good to include, if there's information out there about that. Good job! Estewart97 (talk) 03:51, 9 March 2017 (UTC)