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editHey Sarah Jean. Your content looks mostly good (though you need another citation for "more than twice the size of the county's normal library branches"); I'd recommend making everything a subsection of Attractions.Also "Today, the Angel Oak Park provides visitors a close look at the tree, free of charge" - perhaps build in a sentence or two about the park, but this phrasing seems a bit promotional to me. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:42, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
- Seems like a good expansion. I made one tweak, which you can see in the article history. Cheers! bd2412 T 15:23, 21 October 2012 (UTC)