User talk:Slhudson/Elizabeth A. Wilson

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Hi Slhudson, here are some thoughts about your sandbox:

• We have guidelines here for how to open a biography. It opens now with is an Australian author, professor, and Samuel Candler Dobbs Professor at Emory University., which is good because it identifies the nationality. That is considered standard.
• Typically we put birth year in the first sentence. I noticed it's present in the current version of the article, but there's no reliable source cited to support that it's her birth year. You should include it if you find a source.
• Everything looks well-cited and verifiable! Nicely done.
• explores how antidepressant pharmaceutical data can be useful to feminists this is an interesting concept, and I think more detail could be good here if you have access to secondary sources that talk about the book

That's all I have for you! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:35, 9 June 2020 (UTC)