User talk:Slhudson/sandbox/Banu Subramaniam

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Hi Slhudson, here are some thoughts about your draft so far:

• Nice job adding a citation to the year of birth in the lead!
• The lead is supposed to be a summary of the rest of the article. I think the first sentence of the "Early life" section should say she was born in 1966. Otherwise, this is found in the lead and not in the body.
• Did you mean to remove the "Awards" section, or are you choosing to not work on that section?
• The referencing in general looks great. I'm seeing high-quality sources used abundantly, and no obvious issues with unverified/uncited content.

I'm having a hard time seeing what changes you've made to the article as compared to the one that currently exists. I've noticed a few sentences have been removed. Can you broadly summarize below (or in an email) if you've made changes that I've missed? Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:26, 11 May 2020 (UTC)