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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Slimjesus6 in topic Review

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Source number six is from the New York Times, not a very reputable source. Also, I would put how some of the effects are more localized than others. For example, the orographic effects can be large or small depending on how big the mountain is. The effect can be so small that the change is only felt locally and has no climate change implications on a global scale. I would take out the part where it says "especially in tropical areas". If you cut down any large enough forest you will change the climate, in the long run, no matter where it is cut from. The "mountain" section also needs more citations. It also does have a neutral tone throughout the sections, even though it is rather short. Slimjesus6 (talk) 22:48, 6 May 2017 (UTC)Reply