Snrizvi

AS this article is about " Sindh Land Alienation bill 1947" there should be a reference to copy of particular bill tabled in Sindh assembly in 1947 before partition. Not giving any reference to the context makes this article unreliable. Along with that the references being presented also are not only unreliable but ethnically disputable because none of them have any information on this particular bill. I recommend to have bill in it's real form. Who signed and exactly what date it was tabled. References should be reliable and unbiased from academic or research articles.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Matruka Sindh (August 31)

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Ktkvtsh (talk) 17:16, 31 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Can you please guide which sentence, paragraph of words are unacceptable. This article was submitted with reference from reliable source. I'm sorry I don't understand what need to be changed. Thanks. Snrizvi (talk) 20:09, 31 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Matruka Sindh (October 12)

Latest comment: 26 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Saqib were:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Matruka Sindh and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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— Saqib (talk I contribs) 07:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

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