User talk:StaticOrc/new sandbox
Latest comment: 10 months ago by PineappleCinnamon in topic Peer Review
Peer Review
editThe lead looks great to me! It is concise and provides significance to real life. I don't understand much biology or computer science, but I can see why this is an important subject within the field. The content seems to be neutral as well. There aren't any references yet, but I'm sure that will come later. I like the plans for organization with the headers. The order is ideal for a Wikipedia article. Overall, I like the lead. It's a good introduction to the topic. More information is needed in the other paragraphs, but I can see the future of the article already. Keep going! PineappleCinnamon (talk) 16:16, 13 October 2023 (UTC)