Stuartak
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review
edit1. Adding Larosa's was a good choice because it is a very important part of Cincinnati food/dinning culture. The section heading is correctly labeled and put under the right top heading.
2. By just reading the Larosa's portion I can tell that this heading is about the food culture in Cincinnati. I am able to get a full understanding of what Larosa's is if I had never heard of it.
3. The sections of the whole article does make sense. It flows from fair and attractions into food and history. The history portion might make the most sense as the first part so maybe switching that order around, but leaving it would also be fine.
4. The Larosa's section is about average with the other food categories. Montgomery Inn and Arnold's could maybe use another sentence or two added.
5. There is no bias in the description. It is short and to the point of describing a pizza place.
6. It just says [cite] so I am unable to see the source.
I think that adding Larosa's is a very important food culture to add. I had never heard of this pizza before moving to Cincinnati and since being here I have seen how much people love it. There is a huge following and this section should have been added before this.