Hi John,
Looking good! I have a couple of points I wanted to mention.
- Word count is low - only 765. Were you going to include a picture? Even if you do have a picture, you need to have at least 800 words.
- A good variety of outside sources.
- Writing is very good, and shows good neutrality.
-Ms. Becvar
Kairyth (talk) 16:50, 7 April 2016 (UTC)