User talk:TaeyoungYoon/sandbox
Hi Taeyoung, There doesn't seem to be a page called "precision glass." There's Precision glass moulding, which begins this way: "Precision glass moulding is a replicative process that allows the production of high precision optical components from glass without grinding and polishing. The process is also known as ultra-precision glass pressing. It is used to manufacture precision glass lenses for consumer products such as digital cameras, and high-end products like medical systems. The main advantage over mechanical lens production is that complex lens geometries such as aspheres can be produced cost-efficiently."
There's also a link for "optical components" there in the first line but no actual article. Would either of those ("precision glass" or "optical components") work for you? EricGrunwald (talk) 13:45, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
Hi Taeyoung,
I suggest there be some cohesive devices at the beginning of P2 to connect the description of LCD and OLED to the topic. Otherwise, it might be confusing for readers to jump from Lotus to these two concepts. Another suggestion is that in some places the jargon confuses me. Internal links may be helpful here. This draft is not the final one, so it seems ok at this point.