TheDucksNuts

Talk page for User: TheDucksNuts TheDucksNuts (talk) 03:57, 26 June 2014 (UTC)

thoughts on Nipo T. Strongheart

Hi - do you think it deserves more than "B" rating? Think enough interest could be gathered to give it a shot of development to reach an "A"? --Smkolins (talk) 23:01, 18 September 2014 (UTC)

Hi there,

Nice work on the page so far! I was kicking around ideas in my head about this page after I saw it tagged on the biography pages so far. Never had heard of the guy and read through what is there and found his story to be really interesting so thanks for the effort you have put in.

In terms of rating, I think there is still some work to do to to get to an A class rating. I am no expert, but for a start I think the article might be a bit too long. There is also some issues with sentence structure and grammar which need to be addressed. I was thinking of taking up this article as a copy edit project and meant to post on the talk page but got distracted at work. Maybe we could partner on it and go through one paragraph at a time to agree some changes?

Happy to hear your thoughts, and I will post an example of what i mean on the talk page for you to get an idea of how we might collaborate.

TheDucksNuts (talk) 00:54, 19 September 2014 (UTC)

All good - let's see what we can do. Having taken a break from the article a while I think I can breathe more frealy in the editing development of it. --Smkolins (talk) 02:22, 19 September 2014 (UTC)