Theloudestfire

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shawn Stewart Ruff (June 15)

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Bearcat (talk) 02:12, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Hello! Theloudestfire, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Bearcat (talk) 02:12, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

The GLBT Reviews reference is okay, because it's actually a reasonably detailed review of his work — but the other two links you added are really just directories, so they aren't really quite what I was talking about. I get that it might be a bit difficult to for a new editor to understand exactly what the difference is between the good and bad kinds of referencing, though, so I'm doing a search right now to find some of the better class of sources myself. Bearcat (talk) 20:35, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I've added some improved sources now. Thanks for being understanding; some people get really frustrated when their AFC submissions aren't immediately accepted as is, so thanks for being patient. So if you could hit the "resubmit" button on it now, I can bump it up to mainspace. Bearcat (talk) 21:13, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shawn Stewart Ruff has been accepted

Shawn Stewart Ruff, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Bearcat (talk) 21:35, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Links

The appropriate way to use them would be as references for expanded content in the article, in the same manner as the references that are already there — a properly formatted encyclopedia article would not, however, simply include contextless directory lists of reviews and other media coverage. But at the same time, we don't want to reference-bomb the article with five or six or ten different references for the same content, so the additional links would only be useful if they can support new content beyond what's already in the article right now — if they just provide repeated support for content that already has references for it, then they're not needed in that context. Hope that helps a bit. Bearcat (talk) 21:29, 1 July 2016 (UTC)