My stance on the article...
editWell, since you asked I might as well tell you. My stance on the article... hmm... After deleting that paragraph, I'm actually kinda okay with what the current article looks like. I don't know if its 100% perfect yet though, but at least I'm starting to like what I see. Still, I have no idea where I can go from here.
I also read what you said in the discussion section of the Yoshi's Story article. Thanks a ton for your support. I really appreciate it.
Originally, I was going to give you a whole story to explain my motivations, but I felt this might not be the place to do it. So I put that on my user page instead. Just so you know.