User talk:ThisUserNameIsAlrTaken/Gelsen Gas

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Hey its Joseph! The first paragraph can be made into a few sentences. Maybe less commas, the last part of it Im going paragraph by paragraph and we are still working on it after all. Ramirez4422 (talk) 22:08, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

Also I would suggest to make each new topic you start to make the text bold in the editing tool. Other than that I don't see any grammar errors or anything like that, good work! Ramirez4422 (talk) 22:10, 19 April 2023 (UTC)