User talk:ThomasSavage111/Wagner Houseboat

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Benjamin Mako Hill in topic Feedback on your article

Hi Thomas, just finished your peer review! Hopefully its accessible, if not here's a link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ThomasSavage111/Wagner_Houseboat/Bonnie_Weglin_Peer_Review Bonnie Weglin (talk) 21:51, 31 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

Feedback on your article

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@ThomasSavage111: Wow! This is a fantastic article.

You should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from altsalt. Many won't apply but some might. I've gone through and made a few edits to your articles to clean things up—mostly tiny stylistic things but there are definitely more like that. Look at the history to see what I've done before you move it over.

Do a final pass and try to address any of the things on the list on our website that you think are useful and would improve things. Then go ahead and make it live. Good work! —mako 01:07, 14 February 2020 (UTC)Reply