Reading the article makes me wonder if the ice-albedo feedback is a runaway effect, can snowball earth be seen as runaway in one direction, in the other direction does all the ice on the planet melt?
Is there a citation for inducing earthquakes via post-glacial rebound
What are the effects of the sea warming due to ice retreat?
Are the sea level rises expected pertinent to human life, or are we talking more like centimeters?
Move up the "Ice is very reflective...leading to more warning" to right after the first sentence. This would probably lead better into the global climate change sentence.
The "The change in albedo acts to reinforce...leading to more cooling"