User talk:Treasure lynn98/sandbox

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Hazelwoodb

I think that this is a good start!! Some questions I was wondering about since I don't know anything about this is when he started doing this exactly, or how old he was. Also more detail about why he started and what exactly he was looking for/to do. Trust me, I have the same issues in my own article, so I understand. Just more detail in general and I think it'll be really good! Taylnew (talk) 16:19, 20 April 2018 (UTC)taylnewReply

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This is a great foundation for your article! I would like to have a little more background on him and maybe some more information on how he became such a great hacker at his young age. The most important thing that could improve the article is just formatting the article and figuring out what your subtopics will be. Good job! Hazelwoodb (talk) 16:27, 20 April 2018 (UTC)Reply