User talk:Tssa1926/sandbox

Alex's Peer Review

Act 192 section:

Good citations. The only thing I would recommend would be to split your paragraph up into a few smaller section. Separate some ideas.

Assault Weapon section:

There is nothing there but I assume you are either going to add information or delete the title.

Constitutional Carry:

I would add a little more information about the case. It seems incomplete to me, maybe find some follow up articles.

School carry:

Same as Constitutional carry section

Rifle background check:

Same as assault rifle section

House bill 921:

Same as school, and constitutional carry

I like your last two sections well done.

Overall your page is great and you have a lot of good information cited properly. I would say add a little more information in a few sections and maybe try to break your headlines up into bigger broader sections.

Arj1028 (talk) 02:48, 9 April 2018 (UTC) Alex