User talk:TurtleStones7/Asha de Vos
Latest comment: 4 years ago by TurtleStones7 in topic Feedback
Feedback
edit@TurtleStones7: This looks really good. Since they're both short, you might consider combining the first two sections into an "Early life and education" section, which is more common in articles like this. Other than that, I think you're good. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:45, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you, Ian! TurtleStones7 (talk) 16:51, 16 June 2020 (UTC)