User talk:TurtleStones7/Asha de Vos

Latest comment: 4 years ago by TurtleStones7 in topic Feedback

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@TurtleStones7: This looks really good. Since they're both short, you might consider combining the first two sections into an "Early life and education" section, which is more common in articles like this. Other than that, I think you're good. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:45, 16 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thank you, Ian! TurtleStones7 (talk) 16:51, 16 June 2020 (UTC)Reply