Tyfrazier
Kikuyu people
editI don't understand why you keep reverting the page and introducing information which is highly speculative and not supported by the footnotes. Quoting "lonely Planet" is hardly a credible source, and when you follow the links regards the genetic linkages, the article does not support that the genetic linkage is from West Africa. Whether the Kikuyu people do or do not have some ancestral heritage to the north, continues to be a matter of question which has hardly been disproved and requires further investigation. The question clearly at least warrants investigation and should be noted in these pages. Otherwise I question your reasons and motivation for continuing to remove the information.
Tyfrazier (talk) 15:46, 25 May 2012 (UTC)
- Hi there. Thanks for contacting me; I appreciate the attempt at dialogue. The way Wikipedia's WP:UNDUE policy works is that we can cite the various origin theories of a given ethnic group, but we must do so in relative proportion to their actual prominence. There's nothing in and of itself wrong with the view you indicated suggesting that the Kikuyu have some traditions associated with an Israeli origin. After all, so did (and do) the Lemba, and those traditions were eventually proven to be true. The problem is that you sourced this particular tradition to a blog post, which, despite its title, doesn't actually appear to discuss Jewish origins for the Kikuyu. Wikipedia's self-published sources or WP:SPS policy discourages such references because of their editable nature. Another problem is that you also removed material on the dominant, traditional views as to the origins of the Kikuyu. Namely, the part that reads "Some authorities suggest that they arrived in their present Mount Kenya area of inhabitation from earlier settlements further to the north and east,[3] while others argue that the Kikuyu, along with related Eastern Bantu people such as the Embu, Mbeere and Meru, moved into Kenya from points further south.[4]". This is material that a Kikuyu editor and myself previously discussed in the past and collaborated on (c.f. [1]). Regarding the genetic information, as I understand it, the E3a or E1b1a haplogroup is the signature Bantu marker; the linked pdf also seems to associate it with the Niger-Congo language family, which the Kikuyu language belongs to [2]. Best regards, Middayexpress (talk) 16:37, 25 May 2012 (UTC)
OK, this I can accept in most part. Regarding citations, I think the main citation is Lonely Planet, which is difficult for me to accept as an authoritative source. I would have expected either a book or at least a peer reviewed article. Regarding the part which you indicated I removed, if it truly did happen, then it wasn't my intention. My intent wasn't to introduce a new point of origin, but to simply introduce the fact that there is some question as to the origin of the Kikuyu people. As for the genetics, I noticed the origin of the E1b1a group had been altered to introduce West Africa as the most likely point of origin, whereas previously it was only East Africa. Additionally, when you actually read the source cited on that page, I did not find anything to support the idea that E1b1a had a likely origin in West Africa.
Here is what I suggest. We introduce a new section that introduces the idea that there is at least some oral tradition supporting the idea the Kikuyu may have originally migrated from the north first and then later combined with Bantu speaking persons, and we can expand on the section as different theories are supported or refuted. What do you think?
Tyfrazier (talk) 20:02, 25 May 2012 (UTC)
- I've had a look, and the genetics section doesn't appear to suggest that E1b1a arrived from West Africa. It labels the haplogroup "Sub-Saharan", which I believe it is. I can understand your concerns regarding the Lonely Planet ref. A more academic source would be preferable, so we can change that if necessary. The existing origins section can also be expanded to include a sub-section on the oral traditions that you mention, provided that the material is reliably sourced. But correct me if I'm wrong here: you seem to be suggesting that the Kikuyu assimilated Bantu speakers as they moved southwards rather than actually originally being Bantu peoples. Out of curiosity, how common is this view amongst the Kikuyu? Do they have similar traditions as, say, the Hima or Tutsi suggesting that their ancestors were originally non-Bantu peoples who were gradually assimilated into Bantu society? Middayexpress (talk) 15:06, 26 May 2012 (UTC)
October 2012
editPlease do not add unreferenced or poorly referenced information, especially if controversial, to articles or any other page on Wikipedia about living persons, as you did to Family of Barack Obama. Thank you. Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις 07:22, 13 October 2012 (UTC)
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