User talk:Tygeera/Olubunmi kuku
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Sjb72 in topic Improvements needed to the article.
Improvements needed to the article.
editI have restored the page, and have removed a lot of text which reads as promotional, or at the very least, like a CV. You can still view the text if you look through the article's history (see tab at top of article page). There are two areas you need to address:
- Demonstrate notability (see WP:BIO). You need proper references - all biographies of living people require at least one reference from a notable third party reliable source (see WP:RS). I don't think the links you posted on my page count. Please note that just because the person worked with well known people or is married to a famous person is NOT sufficient to demonstrate notability. See WP:INHERIT.
- Must be written in a neutral manner (see WP:NPOV). The article I restored was full of words and phrases that made it sound like you were promoting the person, whether or not that was your intention (see WP:PUFF). You might also want to read WP:PEACOCK to see how to avoid using those terms.
If you can demonstrate notability of the person with proper references, and rewrite the article to make it more neutral in tone, I will happily restore it. If you have any questions, feel free to drop me a note on my talk page. However, I am not as active as I used to be, so you might get a quicker response from the Help Desk. Stephen! Coming... 11:32, 28 July 2017 (UTC)