Typing.nguyen
Hello. Typing.nguyen (talk) 10:35, 22 July 2018 (UTC)
Ways to improve Diasporic Vietnamese narratives
editHi, I'm Rosguill. Typing.nguyen, thanks for creating Diasporic Vietnamese narratives!
I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. This article is organized in a way that suggests that it is about two different topics: the first half deals with the titular diaspora Vietnamese narratives, while the second half focuses on a subgenre of Vietnamese music. While it does bring in some analysis of how diasporic narratives have affected the popularity of this genre, it goes into far too much depth about the various studios involved with this genre. Consider cutting down on this section, or possibly splitting it into its own article while leaving a link and a much briefer overview in Diasporic Vietnamse narratives. If nothing else, the profiles of specific studios should be shortened––sections like the one for Asia Entertainment are a pretty significant digression from the main topic of the article and could be covered in a sentence, if at all.
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