User talk:Umk5717/Women in Niger

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Ykcat

This is a really in-depth look into child marriages. The information is organized in an easy to read way that makes sense. I think you did really a good job compiling the information. It looks like you spent a lot of time on it. The only feedback I have is to perhaps reword some sentences, particularly the first sentence of the first paragraph and the last sentence of the third paragraph. The sources look great to me. I like that they are fairly recent as well. My final note would just be that if you do decide to add more information to this section then it may be helpful to add sub-headings just to break it up more. Great job! Ykcat (talk) 17:30, 22 October 2021 (UTC)Reply