UncleCliffy
Hmm
editNow, ye wouldn't be... hmm. How to say this without revealing your real name if you don't want it? ...I'll leave blanks. Clifton C___s, would ye? Adam Cuerden talk 23:13, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
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editWeel! Good to have you here! Looking it over witha slightly fluish gaze, it looks on the whole good, though it could use a little more structure to the writing: For instance, the sentence "In 1919, he composed another work that became popular in Britain, Monsieur Beaucaire, based on the novel by Booth Tarkington" abruptly shoves us forwards a quarter of a century, then dumps us back for a discussion of the libretto. Not ideal. Another copy edit or two and it'd be great. It could use more copious references, as the article is otherwise pretty near sufficient quality for the higher levels of Wikipedia ratings, but you could probably get away with out if you don't mind lack of recognition of your good work. I'll try and help with the copyediting tomorrow. Adam Cuerden talk 17:54, 16 November 2006 (UTC)